Hurt Me

I admit, I'm curious, I want to do this BUT, I just don't see the great draw of doing it in someone else's journal. How voyeuristic is that? It's a bit weird and harder to hold onto the comments, so I'm breaking the rules! I'm doing it right here dammit. Give me some feeeeedback, anon commenting on, ip addresses off.

THE ANONYMOUS WRITING FEEDBACK MEME

The actual meme is over here if you want to peek. The point is to comment on my writing and be brutally honest. Hurt me. Come on! I've been getting "u rite guud" comments for so long I could probably scribble the word sex in crayon and get better feedback than that XD Since it's anon, feel free to let your inner bitch out. I'm genuinely curious and willing to work on anything that gets brought to my attention.

That said, I'm going to head off and read some cringeworthy fic I've been poking at. I blame Summer. It's always her fault. *nods* Though I've done it in the past (DBZ: The Musical wat? D:), I can totally see why original song lyrics should be banned from fics. THEY SUCK! I was gonna paste a snatch here, but I looked at it and winced...yeah. Soooooooooooo baaaaaaaaaaaaad!!!!!!!!!!!1